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Molly and Spider by MollyGRodriguez Molly and Spider by MollyGRodriguez
Promo page for comic 2
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woohooligan Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Good start. Good proportions, decent writing. :nod:

The composition on the panels with the spider in front of her face might work a little better if you either raise the spider up above her eyes a bit or if you show it in profile. The art gets a bit cluttered and confusing with all those legs and eyelashes right in the same space. In general, I'd recommend not drawing individual eyelashes except for an extreme close-up on the eyes.

Keep up the good work. :hug:
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MollyGRodriguez Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you for that, and I agree that the spider should have been higher to avoid the clutter, I am going to fix that when its included in my finished project. :)
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woohooligan Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Gladly. Let me know if there's any way I can help. :hug:
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